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Pity on the King

Poor King:
You sat up high,
you held untouched;
Everything had gleamed and glistened.

Poor thing:
Your gold stood tall,
and silver sat strong;
Everything rang when listened.

Sad King:
Goblets gulped full,
platters played plenty;
Everything swelled well-fed.

Sad thing:
Robes were rubied,
gauntlets were gold;
Everything had colour it bled.

Cry King:
Stables stood supple,
gardens grew green;
Everything a small tip-touch.

Cry thing:
Maidens made waiting,
scrumpets soon sampled;
Everything simple as such.

Frown King:
Sheets of satin silks,
blankets brimming comfort;
Everything a sweet, cotton cloud.

Frown thing:
Youth within your wallet,
beauty bound in  purse;
Everything sparkles so splendid.

So King:
Are you happy?
noel burk© 2004
©2006-2009 ~Brophy
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"Frown thing:
Youth within your wallet,
beauty bound in purse;
Everything sparkles so splendid."

Youth in a wallet. Striking idea.

I read this one aloud. It's an odd sort of pause that comes naturally with every stanza. A good thing, I'd say.
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ha. oh my. i remember wtiting this... i was upset that i hadn't written anything for about year. so i started pumping out crummy poems. but this one turned out ok. thank you:heart: i am a person who likes poetry to be read like you are reading a script. it's lovely. but most people don't read it aloud. oh well.

--
noel.
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Some poems I write sound terrible aloud, despite the effort I put into iambics. Go figure.

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